Eindaray Kyaw

Rookie (8th Sep,1996 / Yangon)

An Oarsman - Poem by Eindaray Kyaw

Where is the coast?
Just in the boat
With no one around
He sings even a song!

In western horizon
The king 'Sun' sleeps alone
Merry clouds go brown
(So far) He sings the song!

A shower of rain
Can't let him pain
Miss.Windy starts to frown
(So far) He sings the song!

With force of angry waves
Even rocks can be damaged
How about his wooden bound?
(So far) He sings the song!

His old rudder shapes him solo
How to manage to and fro
Further rowing, no allowed
(So far) He sings the song!

Oh, my dear oarsman!
I wanna know your song
Give people to be strong
Like you, never down! !


Comments about An Oarsman by Eindaray Kyaw

  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/28/2012 5:35:00 AM)


    Oh, my dear oarsman!
    I wanna know your song
    Give people to be strong
    Like you, never down! !

    Unforgettable lines of your poem.I think your poem will be remembered even after you and after us poetic filths many many years to come..
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  • Sunny Rose (9/4/2012 5:27:00 AM)


    I wanna know his song too (Report) Reply

  • (8/28/2012 4:08:00 AM)


    It's very nice. One song can greatly changed the people but... (Report) Reply

  • John Hayes (8/26/2012 8:57:00 PM)


    Where is the coast?
    Just in the boat
    With no one around
    He sings even a song!

    I like!
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  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/26/2012 2:54:00 PM)


    Really nice poem, because of two things:
    first the meaning that is so clear and nice
    second is the tone of the poem, it makes it so enjoyable
    Good job Eindaray, well done!
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 4, 2012


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