An Ode To Names Of Mother Goddess Poem by Savita Tyagi

An Ode To Names Of Mother Goddess

Rating: 5.0

Nav- durga (Part I)

Nine ancient names of Mother Goddess,
So mesmerizing in its melodious rendering.

Some intense emotions and reverence is invoked
simply by its poetic composition and sound vibration.

Beyond my grasp is the full meaning,
Of these melodious, unforgettable verses.
Wandering at the corridors of my mind
I dwell on it's poetic charm day and night.

By some mysterious processes
Each name starts to reveal
It's meaning and a deeper connection
To cosmic workings,
And to our own self.
Awe-struck I am!

In six lines, eight of these names are paired in set of two.
Look at the duality of the Cosmic forces,
And at our physical and psychological energies
Working in pairs!
Pairs that seem to work as opposites,
Yet create and sustain a symphony
Of Life cycle!

The ninth name stands alone as the bestower of grace,
Both in Macrocosm and Microcosm!

Savita Tyagi

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Navratre is a nine day festival of Hindus worshiping and celebrating divine principles of creations in the form of Mother-Goddess. This is the first poem of three part series that I was inspired to write last year while reading the book Devi Mahatamyam.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

This seems well-written but too sophisticated for me, Savita. Nonetheless, I give your new poem five stars *****. : ) bri

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Savita Tyagi 31 October 2023

Thank you so much Bri for reading and commenting on the poem and for your valuable suggestions. Appreciate it very much.

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Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

'In six lines, eight of these names are paired in set of two.' I would use 'sets' of two. I suspect that some of the 'instrumants' in my Life Cycle symphony need tuning! ! !

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Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

stanza 4: again 'its', not 'it's' I especially like 'Awe-struck I am! ' I'm often 'awe-struck' when my wife and I disagree! !

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Bri Edwards 21 October 2023

Savita, 'Wandering at the corridors of my mind I dwell on it's poetic charm day and night.' I'd use 'in' the... OR just 'Wandering the corridors'. I like the imagery of verses wandering in your mind. I'd use 'its', not 'it's' poetic charm....of course. ;) ;)

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