An Old Bicycle Poem by LLM Mbatha

An Old Bicycle



Look! How it leans against the wall!
Picking up dust, dropping down rust
It used to be his legs of steel
To school, to church, to his girl’s house
Through shine and rain
One day he came home looking sad
I noticed on his shirt was a stain of mud
Some grass on his shaved head
I was later made to understand
about his little accident
He had earlier hit a rock and fell!
That day, that whole night
The steel frame lay flat on the floor
Out the door
But at 5: 00 am the next morning
It was his noise that woke me up
Making shine the steel
And black the rubber
Ready to hit the road again!
Now it leans, all day, against the wall…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tia Maria 05 July 2008

another poem perfectly painted... thank you I really enjoy reading yours and visualise every line... you really are talented

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Aasiq the poet 22 May 2007

top class lungelo..ones eyes moisten as it is the grand pa who is being described, and not an old bicycle.. ..regards.. a t p

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Aashish Ameya 24 November 2006

all i can say is this poem is great, when one can able to pick up this little thigs which made our life so beautiful then true poetry happend...good work

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