This friendship between you and me
The love for me,
That I can see
Like honey and bee.
You are my first
You are my last,
You are always best
In your every test.
This love is forever
That you discover,
The love for you
There is no end of due.
A compassionate piece of poetry, lovely and very passionate......
So pure, so true. I like this poem very much...............but where are your other poems, dear Bhagabat? When I had your age, I wrote many many poems, also short and sometimes long, and I love the theme of LOVE also. Please, keep the ink flowing and your poems growing (in quantity AND quality) . The message about TRUE LOVE are always present in poems all the years. Beautiful poem. A 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++
Thank you madam, your message has the magic and power to change my thoughts and poems so much.A real thanks to you madam.I will try myself better than I can do this.
Hello Bhagabat, I love this poem for its strong message of true love. And you write it with firm conviction which i so admire. A beautiful poem........10 Thank you so much dear young poet for reading and commenting on my poem " Love is all embracing."
Nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. A beautiful love poem.
Like honey and bee. is our frienship. promises made in love. hope and pray that it lasts a life time.. very good poem. tony
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thanks dear for sharing budding lotus of friendship.It will spread its fragrance some day sure.
Thank you for your encouraging commitment.