The Wintry Evening Poem by Bhagabat Prasad Hotta

The Wintry Evening

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The heart of the sky,
The sun is sinking in the sea
At sunset of the winter.

Sunday, December 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: evening,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 02 December 2018

Let of snow come Let owl curdle in mist dark Let hearth warm shrink skin

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 02 December 2018

Thank you so much. Nice commitment.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 02 December 2018

Most promising.A new sun must rise in the horizon.Thanks dear.I dare not give any point.A poem is not measurable.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 02 December 2018

Thank you sir for your nice comment.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 December 2018

wah wah what truth the sun has set in winter the night will be cold do come along tell her and hopefully she will but ur just18 what do ye still!

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A short poem as beautiful as the setting sun

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Suratha Kumar Rout 17 September 2019

Dear poet you poem is short and beautiful with great value. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 June 2019

such a nice start, Bhagabat. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

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Bharati Nayak 24 May 2019

A short and meaningful poem - -with much beauty.

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Susan Williams 09 May 2019

Oh, my, this has a delicate Haiku beauty to it! Well done

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