The Wintry Evening Poem by Bhagabat Prasad Hotta

The Wintry Evening

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The heart of the sky,
The sun is sinking in the sea
At sunset of the winter.

The Wintry Evening
Sunday, December 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: evening,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 02 December 2018

Let of snow come Let owl curdle in mist dark Let hearth warm shrink skin

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 02 December 2018

Thank you so much. Nice commitment.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 02 December 2018

Most promising.A new sun must rise in the horizon.Thanks dear.I dare not give any point.A poem is not measurable.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 02 December 2018

Thank you sir for your nice comment.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 December 2018

read all as requested

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A short poem as beautiful as the setting sun

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Suratha Kumar Rout 17 September 2019

Dear poet you poem is short and beautiful with great value. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 June 2019

such a nice start, Bhagabat. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

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Bharati Nayak 24 May 2019

A short and meaningful poem - -with much beauty.

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Susan Williams 09 May 2019

Oh, my, this has a delicate Haiku beauty to it! Well done

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