An Unconscious Thought Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

An Unconscious Thought

Rating: 3.3


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Catch you in the dreams
an unconscious thought
conscious gives up
all the desires go in vain
just only come and go

what will be your noun
what's the adjective
even where your existence
either in the unknown space
or disappeared

In front of the empty
but images in the bean
revolving wheel of time
between the light and shadows
have seen the dream

As if I found you
known in the mystic land
pushes the conscious passions
even in the subconscious illusion
Comes an unconscious thought
~~
@Musfiq us shaleheen

Wednesday, October 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: magic,philosophical ,philosophy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Tribute to Sigmund Freud and Lalon Fakir
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liza Sudina 14 October 2015

I read it to the end - and the first comment that came to me was: magic! and I see a note - and it is magic as a topic! very pleasant - I reread it! add to favorite poems.

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Shakil Ahmed 14 October 2015

wonderful poem, nicely penned, thanks for sharing. if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.

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