An Unforgettable Trip (Part 5) Poem by Rebecca Navarre

An Unforgettable Trip (Part 5)

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We giggled at the thought of boot being lost in
manure forever and agreed if ever found we would
never wear it! The cows could have it, and we giggled
at the thought of a four legged cow, wearing one boot!
To our surprise the next morning when we woke, there at
the foot of the bed was my girlfriends boot! My Uncle
Joey had went out that night in search of it! Grandma
had cleaned and dried it out and left it there for us!
We thanked Grandma and Grandpa, and of course Uncle Joey,
as he stood there with that quirky look apon his face. As
we climbed into the car, for the ride back home. We laughed
and past the boot, back and forth, pretending it was filled
with manure. Saying you have to wear it! No you do! As we
learned true friendship, caring and sharing, even in unfortunate
circumstances was like! As we both agreed, that was one trip
we would never forget! Leaving Grandmas was always the hardest
part! Although we always knew we would return soon! For we were
true cowgirls now, as Grandma and Grandpa said!

An Unforgettable Trip (Part 5)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Van Der Hart 11 June 2017

Rebecca, I suspect you should be sleeping.... Thanks for all your kind comments. We could perhaps exchange some stories by email. I will put my book of stories on Kindle in due course. Sleep now, sleep!

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Rebecca Navarre 12 June 2017

Laurie, Thank You! ! ! ! ! And You Are So Very Welcome! ! ! ! ! Goodness! ! ! ! ! I am a slow reader... Your Stories Sound So Very Wonderful, ! ! ! ! ! And Filled, , , With Beauty! ! ! ! ! Would Love To Hear! ! ! ! ! ... Mine, heh, I have a few. This One I Felt Could Of Been A Little More Detailed In Some Area's.80%True,20% a dream drempt. And a couple others, need a little smoothing, on the edges, heh. A couple small ones, smaller than this, here, possibly. Shy...New & Learning at All, & typing slow like yet one paw,2, Hope, to learn that too... heh, I was talked into trying my poetry here at Ph.... You Are An Amazing Person! ! ! ! ! I Would Enjoy Reading More Of Your Writings! ! ! ! ! Kindle, , , Or, , , I Would Enjoy Talking With You More... Where... Or However... If You Wish, And Thank You, Slept... :) May, , , You As Well! ! ! ! ! May You Also, Always Find Many Smiles! ! ! ! ! And Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Becca

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Laurie Van Der Hart 09 June 2017

This is classic, Rebecca! What a wonderful memory, well told. So Grandpa and Uncle Joey went out and found the boot? ! Amazing. Your picture says it all - it's lovely. Your story is a gem. Have you recorded more memories like this? I recently wrote five short stories based on childhood memories. It was such fun.

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Rebecca Navarre 11 June 2017

Thank You! ! ! Laurie, I Appreciate Very Much All Your Very, Very Kind Comments! ! ! ! ! These Short Stories Of Childhood Memories, I Think Keep Our Hearts Young In Many Ways! ! ! ! ! Which Is Always A Good Thing! ! ! ! ! heh. I have a longer story version, of poem Ole Toro. And a couple other short ones, & quite a few I hope to someday put to paper, heh. They are really Fun! ! ! ! That Is So Wonderful You've Written Five! ! ! ! ! Are They Here On Ph? I Would Love To Visit! ! ! ! ! As Well As, Bird Revolution! ! ! ! ! And A Tribute To A Polish Poetess! ! ! ! ! Wilslawa Szymborska Sound Like A Very Amazing Poetess As Well! ! ! ! ! I am Sorry To See She Passed Away 2012! ! ! ! ! Thank You! ! ! ! ! ! For Sharing And Recommending! ! ! ! ! You Are An Incredibly Talented And Amazing Poetess! ! ! ! ! God Bless! ! ! ! ! And Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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