Rebecca Navarre

In His Daze... - Poem by Rebecca Navarre

He's in the barn, watching the golden rays of sun
stream down. He's climbing the big, old oak tree, that
he's found. He's running off threw the blades of grass.
He's thinking of, that cute, little girl who smiled at him
last. He's full of wonder, young and free. He's imagining
what there is yet to be. He's laying in the fresh cut hay.
He's down by the river, listening to what it has to say. And
as the pearly strands of rain come down. The fields become a
play ground. And in the mist and rain, of a warm summers
morn, a cool breeze blows, and new is born! There, he is, as
he stares off in that glaze. There, .. There! He is in his

Topic(s) of this poem: father

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Papa All My Heart!

Comments about In His Daze... by Rebecca Navarre

  • (5/28/2017 12:31:00 AM)

    Rebecca, I'm not sure how I missed this one when it was Poem Of The Day. Belated Congrats! Congrats! Congrats!
    It is truly worthy of that honour. I didn't have the best relationship with my father, but your poem had quickly and effortlessly triggered some treasured moments. It must have been your beautiful vivid imagery. I sincerely thank you for your heart-felt ode to your father. It left me with tears of joy.
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    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (5/28/2017 6:59:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! Richard, Goodness! ! ! ! ! God Bless! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Such A
    Very Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Very Strong An Powerful! ! ! ! !
    Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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  • Kathy Van Kurin (12/1/2016 8:43:00 PM)

    in His Daze...
    Rebecca navarre,
    This poem is powerful in it's ode to your papa. Your heart is giving his life a new song, a new life by it's sharing with all of us! How beautiful you have expressed your vison of this one who gave you life. It inspired me i must say. Thank you thrice! Bless you Kathy
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    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (12/2/2016 9:13:00 PM)

    Thank You! Kathy For Your Very Kind Response! I Do So Look Forward To Reading More
    Of Your Wonderful Writings! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !

  • Khaled Ehtesham (11/26/2016 4:17:00 AM)

    its a poem which has many dimensions, it drives us to think in many ways...... i love it......... (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (11/26/2016 7:43:00 PM)

    Thank You! Khaled, For Your Kind Response! I Look Forward To Reading More Of Your
    Wonderful Inspiring Work! ! ! Many Smiles! ! !

  • Kim Barney (11/11/2016 11:24:00 PM)

    in his daze...
    Reminds me of my childhood. That picture could be me and my siblings.
    Very nostalgic poem.
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    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (11/12/2016 7:08:00 PM)

    Thank You! Again Kim, That's Wonderful To Hear! I Look forward To Reading More
    Of Your Wonderful Work! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !

  • Susan Williams (10/24/2016 7:35:00 PM)

    Oh. My. Word. You have a huge talent. HUGE! ! ! This poem lives and breathes! It trails sunshine and the dusty scent of hay behind its passage. 10 is not enough! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! a thousand 10's are not enough! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! But I give you the best I can give. Also adding this poem to my list of favorite poems. (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/25/2016 6:17:00 PM)

    Thank You Again! Susan, For Your Very Thoughtful Response! This One Always Brings Tears to My
    Eyes, In A Happy Melancholy way! Thank You! ! ! I am In Awe And Spellbound by Your Work! ! !

  • Unwritten Soul (10/23/2016 2:22:00 AM)

    Respect and big hug to your great papa,
    The poem is very honestly created, born from a forever lil girl inside you
    That what this poem so sweet and so great..nostalgic as always
    Loved it
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    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/23/2016 5:51:00 PM)

    Now I Think I'm Redder than I've Ever Been! ! ! I'm Flattered! When I So Love Your Work! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/8/2016 6:30:00 AM)

    He climbs big oak tree. Watching the golden rays of sun is definitely very interesting. He is in his days. New born's thought is amazingly painted in color of words. Very interesting poem on father topic.10 (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/8/2016 4:39:00 PM)

    Thank You for such a Kind and Generous reply! Bless You!

  • (10/6/2016 12:28:00 PM)

    Beautiful and vivid description of a young boy's awakening to life. The excitement and discovery flow thru poetic descriptions. A wonderful one among many ' and new is born'. Life, excitement, discovery so nicely performed.
    Well merited, poem of the day.
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    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2016 5:16:00 PM)

    Thank you for your Thoughtfulness!

  • Anil Kumar Panda (10/6/2016 11:52:00 AM)

    Beautiful poetry. Takes me to the countryside where i like to loiter from dawn to dusk. Amazing flow. Loved it. Keep inking and Congrats. (Report) Reply

  • (10/6/2016 11:11:00 AM)

    Simply Superb imagery as also the poem. Heartiest Congrats on it' well deserved Poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2016 5:42:00 PM)

    Thank You for such a Generous response

  • Seamus O' Brian (10/6/2016 9:57:00 AM)

    ahhh....those days when what is to be is so much greater and wondrous than what has been. This piece came glinting into my morning like the sun of my childhood finding its way into my office. Thank you for the beautiful memories, and congratulations on Poem of the Day! (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2016 5:18:00 PM)

    Thank You for your Beautiful reply!

  • Barry Middleton (10/6/2016 6:37:00 AM)

    Lovely! reminds me of myself many years ago. A 10! (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2016 5:48:00 PM)

    Thank You for such kindness! Bless You!

  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/6/2016 6:14:00 AM)

    The golden ray! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2016 5:21:00 PM)

    Thank You for your Kindness!

  • Robert Murray Smith (10/6/2016 12:27:00 AM)

    A nice poem of dreams. The images in this poem are very poetic. 10

    Congrats for poem of the day. Well deserved.

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    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2016 5:23:00 PM)

    Thank You for being so Thoughtful!

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 26, 2016

Poem Edited: Monday, October 10, 2016

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