Rebecca Navarre


In His Daze... - Poem by Rebecca Navarre

He's in the barn, watching the golden rays of sun
stream down. He's climbing the big, old oak tree, that
he's found. He's running off threw the blades of grass.
He's thinking of, that cute, little girl who smiled at him
last. He's full of wonder, young and free. He's imagining
what there is yet to be. He's laying in the fresh cut hay.
He's down by the river, listening to what it has to say. And
as the pearly strands of rain come down. The fields become a
play ground. And in the mist and rain, of a warm summers
morn, a cool breeze blows, and new is born! There, he is, as
he stares off in that glaze. There, .. There! He is in his
Day's!

Topic(s) of this poem: father


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Papa All My Heart!

Comments about In His Daze... by Rebecca Navarre

  • Jeanette Telusma (10/6/2017 9:06:00 PM)


    - - watching the golden rays of sun
    stream down. - - - A wonderful poem and Congratulations! ! ! ! !
    Becca. Well deserved! ! ! ! 10++++
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    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2017 11:09:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! Jeanette, For Your Very Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your
    Poetry Ever So Beautifully And Powerfully, Flows With Spirit, Nature,
    Kindness, Heart, And Soul! ! ! ! ! Touching All Who Read And Come To
    Know, , , Your Poetry! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much Again My Friend! ! ! ! !
    :) Hope Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! ! Was laid out on the
    heating pad Yesterday heh, Goodness! ! ! ! ! But, Feeling A Bit Better Today! ! !
    Hope You Are Well! ! ! ! ! :)

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  • Lyn Paul (10/6/2017 6:14:00 PM)


    I can picture this beautiful life in the wonders of nature of your Papa and through your eyes,
    Adore the picture and the love you share.
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    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2017 10:52:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! Lyn, For Such An Ever So Beautifully Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! !
    I Look Forward To Visiting Your Beautiful Poetry! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! !
    :) Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (10/6/2017 6:12:00 PM)


    Such a brilliant poem, Rebecca... congrats for being chosen.... a huge 10+++++ (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2017 10:45:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! Bernard, For Such An Ever So Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! I Look
    Forward To Visiting Your Beautifully Wonderful Poetry Again! ! ! ! !
    Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! :) Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! !
    And Smiles! ! ! ! !

  • Susan Williams (10/6/2017 5:22:00 PM)


    To see this being made poem of the day and you poet of the day pleases me immensely. You are such an enthusiastic and sincere wordsmith that a lot more members will be now visiting and seeing what your fans have already seen. Congratulations, dear Becca! (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2017 9:24:00 PM)

    Dear Susan, Thank You! ! ! ! ! Always Honored By Your Visits And Kind
    Replies! ! ! ! ! :) Goodness! ! ! ! ! Was on the heating pad Yesterday! ! ! ! ! heh.
    Good To See You As Always, , , My Friend! ! ! ! ! You Are An Ever So Very
    Talented Poetess! ! ! ! ! Who's Poetry Is Ever So Deeply Beautiful To Read! ! ! ! ! !
    Filled With Beauty, Nature, Heart And Soul, And A Kindness That Glows! ! ! ! !
    Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! :) Heart And Soul...Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! !
    And Smiles! ! ! ! !

  • (10/6/2017 2:32:00 PM)


    Congratulations on the poem of the day. It is magnificent. It reminds me of early childhood, and that sense of joy and security when father was known to around....wherever we went, wherever and whenever we needed him. A terrific poem. (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2017 9:06:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! ! ! Ever So Much Mj, For Such A Beautifully Thoughtful
    And Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! I Look Forward To Visiting Your Wonderfully Beautiful
    Poetry Again! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! :) Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/6/2017 12:14:00 PM)


    Watching the golden rays! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2017 9:00:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! Edward, :) For Such An Ever So Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! I Look
    Forward To Reading More Of Your Ever So Beautifully Done Poetry! ! ! ! !
    Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

  • Unwritten Soul (10/6/2017 10:00:00 AM)


    I commented this poem once, i still remember the words and photo....and i come here just to say congrats because your beautiful touching poem now is one of selected poem from members, which is an honour for you to be one of it....keep it coming, the idea and nostalgic wave! (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2017 8:54:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! Soul, Always Honor By Your Visits And Replies! ! ! ! ! You
    Are An Ever So Very Talented Poet! ! ! ! ! Who's Powerfully Beautiful Poetry
    Touches Hearts And Souls In Every Word Sewn! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever
    So Much! ! ! ! ! :) Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! ! Friend, May Paths
    Always Be Bright! ! ! ! !

  • Anil Kumar Panda (10/6/2017 7:54:00 AM)


    Very nice. Your style of telling a story is amazing. Congrats. (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2017 8:33:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! Anil, For Such A Very Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! I
    Look Forward To Visiting Your Beautiful Poetry Again! ! ! ! !
    Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! :) Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

  • Babatunde Aremu (10/6/2017 5:48:00 AM)


    A poem of appreciation of a dedicated and focused personality. Nice write! (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2017 8:26:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! Babatunde, For Such A Very Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! I
    Look Forward To Visiting Your Wonderful Poetry! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! :)
    Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

  • Tom Allport (10/6/2017 4:17:00 AM)


    a lovely tribute poem that is full of wonderful personal happy memories of a time in the not so far past? ...................written with great love Rebecca! (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2017 5:55:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! Tom, For Such A Beautifully Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! :)
    Those Memorie's Are Always Near And Dear! ! ! ! ! Your Poems Are Filled With
    Incredible Beauty, Heart, And Soul, That Touches Reader, With The Words
    They Come To Know! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! :) Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! !
    And Smiles! ! ! ! !

  • Kim Barney (10/6/2017 1:01:00 AM)


    Congratulations for having this chosen as poem of the day again! (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2017 5:30:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! Kim, For Such An Ever So Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poems Are Ever
    So Beautifully Painted Into Hearts And Minds, Touching The Souls Of All Those
    Who Come By! ! ! ! ! :) Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/6/2017 12:47:00 AM)


    This is my second visit to this poem. Dear Rebecca, I am happy that this poem has been selected as the poem of the day. Congratulations. (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2017 11:17:00 PM)

    Friend :)

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2017 5:11:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, Always Honored By, Your Visits And Replies! ! ! ! ! You Are
    Ever So Very Talented! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Flows With Spirit, Wisdom, Nature, And Depth,
    Ever So Beautifully! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! ! :)

  • Robert Murray Smith (10/6/2017 12:45:00 AM)


    Another poem of the day. Congratulations again.

    Robert
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    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/7/2017 4:56:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! Robert, Goodness! ! ! ! ! Was on the heating pad yesterday...Wow! ! ! ! ! ...
    Good to see You, Friend. :) Always Honored By Your Visits! ! ! ! ! You Are Such
    An Ever So Very Talented Poet! ! ! ! ! Your Poems Make People Smile, And
    Hold Knowledge, Depth, Nature, And Beauty, That Is Ever So Wonderful To
    Read! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

  • Jonathan Maldonado (8/29/2017 10:34:00 PM)


    I loved this write. Oozing with nostalgia and the purity and innocence of the good old days when things were simpler and time took its time. Thank you for sharing Rebecca! (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (9/1/2017 5:21:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! Jonathan, For Such A Beautifully Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! !
    I Look Forward To Visiting Your Poetry! ! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

  • (5/28/2017 12:31:00 AM)


    Rebecca, I'm not sure how I missed this one when it was Poem Of The Day. Belated Congrats! Congrats! Congrats!
    It is truly worthy of that honour. I didn't have the best relationship with my father, but your poem had quickly and effortlessly triggered some treasured moments. It must have been your beautiful vivid imagery. I sincerely thank you for your heart-felt ode to your father. It left me with tears of joy.
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    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (5/28/2017 6:59:00 PM)

    Thank You! ! ! Richard, Goodness! ! ! ! ! God Bless! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Such A
    Very Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Very Strong An Powerful! ! ! ! !
    Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

  • Kathy Van Kurin (12/1/2016 8:43:00 PM)

    in His Daze...
    Rebecca navarre,
    This poem is powerful in it's ode to your papa. Your heart is giving his life a new song, a new life by it's sharing with all of us! How beautiful you have expressed your vison of this one who gave you life. It inspired me i must say. Thank you thrice! Bless you Kathy
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    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (12/2/2016 9:13:00 PM)

    Thank You! Kathy For Your Very Kind Response! I Do So Look Forward To Reading More
    Of Your Wonderful Writings! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !

  • Khaled Ehtesham (11/26/2016 4:17:00 AM)


    its a poem which has many dimensions, it drives us to think in many ways...... i love it......... (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (11/26/2016 7:43:00 PM)

    Thank You! Khaled, For Your Kind Response! I Look Forward To Reading More Of Your
    Wonderful Inspiring Work! ! ! Many Smiles! ! !

  • Kim Barney (11/11/2016 11:24:00 PM)

    in his daze...
    Reminds me of my childhood. That picture could be me and my siblings.
    Very nostalgic poem.
    (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (11/12/2016 7:08:00 PM)

    Thank You! Again Kim, That's Wonderful To Hear! I Look forward To Reading More
    Of Your Wonderful Work! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !

  • Susan Williams (10/24/2016 7:35:00 PM)


    Oh. My. Word. You have a huge talent. HUGE! ! ! This poem lives and breathes! It trails sunshine and the dusty scent of hay behind its passage. 10 is not enough! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! a thousand 10's are not enough! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! But I give you the best I can give. Also adding this poem to my list of favorite poems. (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/25/2016 6:17:00 PM)

    Thank You Again! Susan, For Your Very Thoughtful Response! This One Always Brings Tears to My
    Eyes, In A Happy Melancholy way! Thank You! ! ! I am In Awe And Spellbound by Your Work! ! !

  • Unwritten Soul (10/23/2016 2:22:00 AM)


    Respect and big hug to your great papa,
    The poem is very honestly created, born from a forever lil girl inside you
    That what this poem so sweet and so great..nostalgic as always
    Loved it
    (Report) Reply

    Rebecca Navarre Rebecca Navarre (10/23/2016 5:51:00 PM)

    Now I Think I'm Redder than I've Ever Been! ! ! I'm Flattered! When I So Love Your Work! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 26, 2016

Poem Edited: Monday, October 10, 2016


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