In His Daze... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

In His Daze...

Rating: 4.6

He's in the barn, watching the golden rays of sun
stream down. He's climbing the big, old oak tree, that
he's found. He's running off through the blades of grass.
He's thinking of, that cute, little girl who smiled at him
last. He's full of wonder, young and free. He's imagining
what there is yet to be. He's laying in the fresh cut hay.
He's down by the river, listening to what it has to say. And
as the pearly strands of rain come down. The fields become a
play ground. And in the mist and rain, of a warm summers
morn,a cool breeze blows, and new is born! There, he is, as
he stares off in that glaze. There,.. There! He is in his

In His Daze...
Monday, September 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: father
Papa All My Heart!
Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 April 2018

The Lord that you depict here is the God of all Lords THE SUN IS EVERY WHERE MADAM LOVELY CREATION WE seem to be a real SPIRITUALIST Lady I have a friend like you too you are a good naturalist creative poet and so my request be adhered to....If I were a poet, And you were deaf? I would sketch pictures in the sand, ....You are the right kind of poet I am looking for....

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Rebecca Navarre 12 April 2018

Thank You! ! ! Poet Poet, For Your Kind Reply And Recommendations! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Very Touching To Heart And Mind! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Rini Shibu 25 March 2018

Beautiful poem and lovely expression..he is down by the Rini we, listening to what it has to say

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Rebecca Navarre 25 March 2018

Thank You! ! ! Rini, For Your Very Beautiful And Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! With Ever Such Beauty And Heart Your Poetry Shines, Bringing Inspiration And Delight To All Who Stop By! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Lyn Paul 06 October 2017

I can picture this beautiful life in the wonders of nature of your Papa and through your eyes, Adore the picture and the love you share.

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Rob Lamberton 04 March 2024

I've been in a daze before!

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Nurul Hoque 22 December 2023

Something Extraordinary. Thanks dear friend

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Susan Williams 06 March 2023

Reread this and enjoyed it even more the second time around! ! ! wish I could give it 5 stars again cuz it deserves a hundred beautiful stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 March 2022

A poem that strikes a chord......wonderful......10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 March 2022

A marvellous tribute to a loving and caring Dad I visualised my beloved Dad through your poem.

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