deep in the ring of life
one needs yeast
to rise above
the burden of labor
and edge of grace
- Ben Gieske, September 9,2008
published on 12-04-2008 by Shreve Memorial Library on their electronic poetry network as the poem of the day
Go to: www.shreve-lib.org/poemofday.htm
Very good metaphorical allusion. Deep and thought provoking
This is very good work, so inspiring, thankyou Ben Love duncan X
How sweet! . Sounds like a calm breeze with a heavenly view. Kind regards Aine
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'Ring, yeast, rise, labor and grace': a quintet of power packed images that evoke the resilience of life. Thanks for a marvelously uplifting poem!