indira babbellapati

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And I Flow... - Poem by indira babbellapati

Unnamed river of mysterious origins
At the high mountains, am i
Flowing in multiple paths
From the terrains touched
Do I get my myriad names…

Some lock my flow
Some block my rhythm
Some quench their thirst
Some wash their murk
Some just pass me by…

I feed
I flood
And I keep flowing
Absorbing all yet at core
I’m what I am at my origins…

02feb2010
07.20hrs


Comments about And I Flow... by indira babbellapati

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (5/24/2013 10:01:00 AM)


    Nice flow. Keep on flowing. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/17/2010 2:49:00 AM)


    ‘Absorbing all yet at core ‘I’m what I am at my origins…’

    Yeah what you’re that you’re…

    Kept you enigmatic as ‘Unnamed’ ‘Mysterious’…

    No you’re not so you’re Poetica Naturalis
    Voted 10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (2/6/2010 10:58:00 PM)


    That unnamed mysterious river and the flow still a dilemma, a great poem dear English professor! (Report) Reply

  • (2/2/2010 11:19:00 AM)


    Some lock my flow
    Some block my rhythm
    Some quench their thirst
    Some wash their murk
    Some just pass me by…

    M'am what wonderful lines. When man with nature, her anguish can be understood. yet she is resilient. She ebbs and flows..wonderful work m'am...
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  • (2/2/2010 2:40:00 AM)


    a lovely poem ma'am.u never fail to touch the cord of the reader's heart.i simply loved it. (Report) Reply

  • (2/2/2010 1:16:00 AM)


    a lovely beautiful flowing poem (Report) Reply

  • (2/2/2010 12:34:00 AM)


    nice work Indira, as always
    it made me wished to contain and allow no single dropp left flowing
    because i believed..its all gold
    (Report) Reply

  • (2/1/2010 11:48:00 PM)


    you are talking about Ganges or someone else, is not clear in the poem, indira....just think about it, dear..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 1, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 18, 2010


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