anushmadhu P.Bharathi

Animation Of Your Kiss - Poem by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

Your kisses
Are flowing
Through whining pebbles
And widening like river.
While the small
Fishes are splashing
In the blood-and
There is a kingfisher
On my vein.

(In Tamil- Mazhaippen-Kavigar.Phazhani Bharathi)

Comments about Animation Of Your Kiss by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (6/19/2010 3:52:00 AM)

    well explained your part in this poem... well detailed and described... nice write! (Report) Reply

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  • St Antoine de la Vuadi (2/22/2010 8:40:00 AM)

    How could a man write about the animation of kisses? Extremely unbelievable but perfect and poetic. (Report) Reply

  • (2/5/2010 5:23:00 AM)

    Animation of Your Kiss by the words of a poet
    I can feel it...very well done +++10
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  • (1/22/2010 10:14:00 AM)

    i most liked this line

    There is a kingfisher
    On my vein.

    well done
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  • (1/15/2010 7:34:00 PM)

    Nice work.

    There is a kingfisher on my vein? (could you explain?)

    Keep writing.
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  • (1/14/2010 12:15:00 AM)

    i've never had such animation before. thanks for the new experiment. (Report) Reply

  • (1/11/2010 11:05:00 PM)

    your lips sealed my day of remembering of the soul....the
    first kiss wonder the closeness of the beautiful
    my dear friend i do love reading your poem... God bless....
    a 10 +++
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  • (1/11/2010 8:41:00 AM)

    Even a kiss can reflect the oceanic rightly shown in this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Donall Dempsey (1/10/2010 12:05:00 PM)

    A kiss such as this...the concepts reach to touch the untouchable and yet we are graced with the trace of how the kiss is experienced and how magnificent it feels. Powerful stuff with your surreal imagery telling it like it is.

    love Donall Donall
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  • (12/29/2009 10:46:00 AM)

    Lots of abstractions for a kiss (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2009 10:02:00 AM)

    short but descriptive with powerful imagary, its very good :) (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2009 3:18:00 PM)

    the title of your poem should be '' fisher of kisses'' :)) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 16, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 30, 2011

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