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The Sun Has Burst The Sky

Rating: 4.1
The sun has burst the sky
Because I love you
And the river its banks.

The sea laps the great rocks
Because I love you
And takes no heed of the moon dragging it away
And saying coldly 'Constancy is not for you'.
The blackbird fills the air
Because I love you
With spring and lawns and shadows falling on lawns.

The people walk in the street and laugh
I love you
And far down the river ships sound their hooters
Crazy with joy because I love you.
COMMENTS
M Asim Nehal 04 February 2021
The repetition 'Because I love you' enhanced the level of poem to a different level.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 February 2021
Wonderful use of hyperbole!
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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 February 2021
The black bird fills the air because..
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Ask Sun 03 February 2021
Because I love you... beautiful because I love you
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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 February 2021
f 'Warning', first published by Souvenir Press Ltd in 1997, has now been reprinted 41 times. WOW! 5 Stars for this TMPOTD. Such mesmerizing poem!
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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 February 2021
5 Stars for Jenny Joseph because I love her fantastic poems like 'Warning'. So exuberantly rendered!
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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 February 2021
And far down the river ships sound their hooters Crazy with joy because I love you.Yes, absolutely, when in love everything seems possible, true or not true, but because of the love at that moment, all things are fantastic and accepted. Congrat for the Modern Poem Of The Day! 5 tars
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Jannatul Merry 03 February 2021
The sea laps the great rocks Because I love you And takes no heed of the moon dragging it away And saying coldly 'Constancy is not for you'. The blackbird fills the air Because I love you
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Yiyan Han 01 December 2020
The people walk in the street and laugh I love you And far down the river ships sound their hooters Crazy with joy because I love you. - Envious actions are depicted.
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Gordon Walter 21 November 2020
Yes love can make anything happen.
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