Fiona Davidson

Rookie - 139 Points (From beyond time)

Another Day - Poem by Fiona Davidson

Another day, another month
They come and go so swiftly
I blink and then turn the page
And the seconds race right by

Another tear falls over my skin
To join the river cried before
Moving on seems so easy
Just one step then one more

Today is just another day
It begins and ends in night
The sun rises then falls away
The moon will come again

Strength comes from lifes adventures
It lifts us from the grief of this world

Comments about Another Day by Fiona Davidson

  • Adeline Foster (12/9/2011 5:48:00 PM)

    Good write here. Read mine - Boomerang -
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  • (6/3/2010 11:15:00 PM)

    OMG Fi, you know I can not only relate to this word for word, but I can identify with everything you said here. It is what I said in so many other words, when I was 12 years old. That was over 40 years ago. I am very happy to see it finally put into words that others can see. There was always one more tear to join the river that I had cried already. Thank you very much for sharing this. A 10+++++

    Love & hugs,
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  • (10/26/2009 10:57:00 PM)

    A well observed and cleansing poem with a with two great last lines. (Report) Reply

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  • (10/9/2009 7:28:00 AM)

    Strength comes from lifes adventures
    It lifts us from the grief of this world
    Uplifting words Fi......Maggie
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  • (10/7/2009 9:07:00 AM)

    I agree with Stephen, great write...we gotta get out there and make it happen..10 (Report) Reply

  • (10/7/2009 7:32:00 AM)

    Loved the poem Fiona. The last two lines are so apt and put everything within into perspective.
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  • (9/29/2009 6:58:00 AM)

    Taking these steps forward are huge for you...A gentle, thoughtful poem...x
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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 28, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 28, 2011

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