londiwe buthelezi

Rookie (31 may 1991 / empangeni, south africa)

Another Love Song - Poem by londiwe buthelezi

last night we were alright.but now i feel all alone.
you keep ignoring me, you don't pick up the phone.
was it something that i did? or maybe something that i said?
one minute we we're laughing, and the next our love was dead.

it's over now; and i can't beg you to stay.
i guess we're over now; but did it have to end this way?
and we're over now; and i'm not feeling ok.
so we're over now.what else is there to say?

our conversations were so long, but now we can't even say hello
when did all this happen? where did our love go?
i dream about us at night, i dream we still had fun.
but i wake up then i realise that both of us are done.


Comments about Another Love Song by londiwe buthelezi

  • (7/15/2009 5:46:00 AM)

    nice words of love, well written poem..10 from me (Report)Reply

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  • (7/14/2009 4:13:00 AM)

    There's a lot of heartbreak interwoven into that love song!
    good work.
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  • (7/13/2009 5:10:00 AM)

    you sang this song well
    I could feel the pathos in every word
    hey Londiwe-Anurag told me to read
    yours. Good I did it--your really good
    -10 anjali
    (do read mine Michael Jackson and Love Letters
    on the Sands of Tme)
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  • (4/27/2009 3:16:00 PM)

    so so sad, really hope you can or did move on, that was a a heartfelt poem, that seems very honest (Report)Reply

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  • (4/27/2009 1:48:00 AM)

    i like the simplicity of the poem...speaks of how quickly feelings can change and one is left to figure out the why, when, and how of it all...and to go forward with the what now question as one surveys the ruins (Report)Reply

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  • (4/25/2009 2:50:00 AM)

    A love song gone wrong a trillion times this happens until the magic of mr right,
    well done regards
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  • (4/24/2009 10:11:00 PM)

    Really nice poem though it wasn't nice at all I really felt your emotion I liked the way it flowed and everything great write and remember Spread Yourself! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (4/24/2009 3:23:00 PM)

    love is in the air in india its spring...come here ill show u beautiful roses that tell epic tales of love...... (Report)Reply

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  • (4/24/2009 7:32:00 AM)

    Nice poem of specific mood............ though it is sad
    well written
    10+
    -Ali
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  • (4/24/2009 6:46:00 AM)

    Some people pass like ships in the night. SAD (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 24, 2009



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