Antagonist * Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Antagonist *



None to me would I call
my fall would be heavy
filled with pain
bones breaking to use you
to cushion ask of me
would I no it is
above me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 13 December 2008

I love way you use words, we all fall at times and suffer; but not from broken bones, it is our heart that usually hurts.

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Linda Winchell 09 December 2008

Pain is only a broken spirits choak hold on the heart! Very beautiful piece! Bravo! Please cont. your inner journey towards a New You! God Bless, Linda Ten! ! ! !

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Tsira Goge 09 December 2008

Yes falling it is always heavy... I wish good luck... 10.............. Tsira

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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