Aoide, What My Life Cannot Confirm Will My Death Deny Poem by Captain Cur

Aoide, What My Life Cannot Confirm Will My Death Deny

Rating: 5.0


In this subtle light the lakes and streams entwining
shadows sparring round the moon, a single beam is cast
upon these ruins, ancient songs of men enshrining,
echoes sounding from the hills of all thy lovers past;
"Be I not thy first to love be I then thy last."
The fields are grey, all is gone, save this lone desire
to place my lips on thy cold brow lying in this cask;
to hear thy voice, know thy lips circling me in fire
clawing at the marble slate my echo rising higher.

Is it love or madness that holds me in this spell,
what my life cannot confirm, will my death deny?
In my simple lines of verse does a sadness dwell,
joy is a visceral state does not reason why?
As I ponder on my fate, did I hear thee sigh?
If my words have any poise, any charms to sell
rise up from thy barren tomb, open up thine eyes!
The echoes cease with a breath, breathe deep and expel,
we shall claim this gladsome earth where gods and men rebel.

Saturday, July 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: goddess,hope,longing,love,muse
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is one of a series of poems written to the goddess, Aoide, who was one of the three original Boeotian muses.
Other poems in this series:
1) Aoide, What Glistens On Thy Lips
2) Aoide, Silken Is The Falling Moon
3) Aoide, If I Can Only Master But One Line
4) Aoide, Femininity Thy Power And Thy Strength
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2018

Is it love or madness that holds me in this spell, what my life cannot confirm, will my death deny? .........impressive inscription with a nice theme. This is a beautiful poem on goddess and love from a series poems on Goddess. Thanks for sharing.

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Kostas Lagos 22 July 2018

You know how to travel your readers on poetic realms and seas! Thanks for this masterpiece!

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Robert Murray Smith 21 July 2018

Aoide, sings this poem from her throne. Wonderfully penned.++10

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Rini Shibu 21 July 2018

Is it love or madness that hold me in this spell.. Well penned

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