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Approaching Women

Rating: 3.3

I tell him it's a numbers game
And complain for always
Doing the 'dirty work'

Ah, but you must remember
He replies, I'm a sniper
And you're a machine gunner

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Kushal Poddar 18 November 2008

Very taut and individualistic.

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Kyle Shield Laster 08 July 2008

i get what you're saying...i think. do these men have names? just wondering.

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Philip Housiaux 14 April 2008

Very elusive little poem, found myself projecting al sorts possible interpretations which for me made it a success thanks

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Edward Wright Haile 05 April 2008

I like the shooting metaphor. It has much bearing on love and womanhood. Cupid's arrow, etc. Most of us I think are snipers. Don't quite follow lines 2-3. If you must remember, etc., does it mean you are bringing him women? Anyhow...

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Ivor Hogg 29 February 2008

if your only interested in quantity the machine gun approach is fine But for quality you must set your sights on a worthwhile target

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