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Aquarium - Poem by ANJANDEV ROY

The fishes move friskily and livelily in the aquarium,
They attract the whole attention of the people in the auditorium,
The people come to see the fishes with great elan
And immediately they are trapped in the moving and colourful fish world,
They stand there spellbound
And enjoy it wholeheartedly without making any sound.
But a little boy comes there and thinks otherwise,
As he sees some dead fishes in the series,
He feels sore about the moveless and deceased fishes
And he also firmly believes,
The place is not really suitable and comfortable for any sensitive person to relish.

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death

Form: Couplet

Comments about Aquarium by ANJANDEV ROY

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/12/2016 3:07:00 AM)

    The fishes move friskily and livelily in the in the aquarium is very amaizng in this sharing definitely. Finely drafted and shared poem with reality. Interesting sharing done.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (1/12/2016 3:06:00 AM)

    A great write.Like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 12, 2016

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 16, 2016

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