In the dark
And silent night,
The man fell deep asleep,
He was very greedy,
After a while,
He thought in his ambitious vision,
"I need more money,
I need more jewels,
I need more comfort, "
Suddenly someone asked him
From the dark environment,
"But why don't you think that you need more knowledge? "
The covetous man became stunned.
Another suggested modificashun A R beautiful In the darkest of silent night, the greedy man fell deep asleep, soon he dreamed an ambitious vision, I need more money, jewels, and comfort, suddenly someone questioned from the darkest environment, why don't you wish you need more knowledge the silly one lay stupifide stunned (MODERN POETRY NEEDS BREVITY DELETE SUPERFLUITY)
A well conveyed poem........ Truly exceptional.....5 stars*****
Knowledge. The perfect answer. Your wisdom shines in these words.
Good Rehtoric question knowledge no monetary value. Congratulations for being chosen as poem of the day.
I don't know why my picture is not reflected there but I have put the comment online. I voted this poem as well.
You you have brilliantly sketched character of a greedy man in this wonderful poem. Well penned dear Anjandev...5 stars
wise poem penned; - greedy mind thinks of nothing except the worldly things like the assets, jewels, money, land properties; greedy mind always feels unstable wherever it goes whenever; greedy mind never feels satisfaction though it earns all desired things; the knowledge of satisfaction, the knowledge of self to the greedy mind is meaningless; congrats for being selected this poem as POD......5******
Knowledge is the key to our happiness. A well written poem, thanks for sharing. Congratulations for being selected Poem of the Day!
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I would like to translate this poem
beautiful poemy bit modifying it permission AAAAA RRRRR give ye I ain't GREEDY In the dark and silent night, the man fell deep asleep, he was very greedy, After a while, he thought in his ambitious vision, " I need more money, jewels, comfort, " Suddenly someone asked from the dark environment, " But why don't you think that you need more knowledge " the covetous man lay stunned.