In the dark
And silent night,
The man fell deep asleep,
He was very greedy,
After a while,
He thought in his ambitious vision,
"I need more money,
I need more jewels,
I need more comfort, "
Suddenly someone asked him
From the dark environment,
"But why don't you think that you need more knowledge? "
The covetous man became stunned.
A well conveyed poem........ Truly exceptional.....5 stars*****
Another suggested modificashun A R beautiful In the darkest of silent night, the greedy man fell deep asleep, soon he dreamed an ambitious vision, I need more money, jewels, and comfort, suddenly someone questioned from the darkest environment, why don't you wish you need more knowledge the silly one lay stupifide stunned (MODERN POETRY NEEDS BREVITY DELETE SUPERFLUITY)
Knowledge. The perfect answer. Your wisdom shines in these words.
Knowledge is the key to our happiness. A well written poem, thanks for sharing. Congratulations for being selected Poem of the Day!
love this short story in verse form that has a very important message! thank you for sharing this, my friend
I'll take more comfort, money, knowledge, and jewels, in that order. Yes, sir! bri ;)
I don't know why my picture is not reflected there but I have put the comment online. I voted this poem as well.
You you have brilliantly sketched character of a greedy man in this wonderful poem. Well penned dear Anjandev...5 stars
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful poemy bit modifying it permission AAAAA RRRRR give ye I ain't GREEDY In the dark and silent night, the man fell deep asleep, he was very greedy, After a while, he thought in his ambitious vision, " I need more money, jewels, comfort, " Suddenly someone asked from the dark environment, " But why don't you think that you need more knowledge " the covetous man lay stunned.