Aquarius Poem by Valerie Dohren

Aquarius

Rating: 4.7


The Fish are dying!

Polluted our crystal clear waters -
our once green valleys, choked and grey
with the debris of living

Lost is all Virginity
and the orbs clamber through space
gasping for breath

Yet now a new Age dawns
amidst the turmoil -
promise of a Golden Age for man
(Insensitive automaton)

And everywhere the cry -

'Big Brother is watching you'

‘ BIG BROTHER IS WATCHING YOU'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard D. Remler 23 May 2012

Stark observations. Fierce reminder that just because we live here, it doesn't mean we own the place. Great write.

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Indira Babbellapati 21 May 2012

concern for the world...

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Heather Wilson 11 April 2012

A good insight into the world today, a very descriptive poem, nice one.

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the end of one era and the beginning of another cycle..

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 07 May 2014

very nice imagery...this poem is very cool!

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Amitava Sur 14 April 2014

A very thoughtful write detailing how the nature is threatened, though we try to camouflage .

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Heather Wilkins 31 July 2013

this is the age of Aquarius good read

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Chris Blazo 14 August 2012

I really like how you feel in this write. We actually have very similar thoughts on nature. I am an avid birder too! Good job on the portraying of anger towards destruction and being kept under finger!

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