~ Aquatic N' Lunar Liaison ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Aquatic N' Lunar Liaison ~

Rating: 4.2


~ Aquatic n' Lunar Liaison ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
13 March 2011


Moon smiles on waveletful ocean
In myriad nisi but surfeit oscillation
Fiancée's face in veritable vibration
Heart in rhapsodic constellations.

Aquatic n' Lunar liaison
Metaphorically in coalition
Solacing in blissful pavilion
Why in realm of obfuscation
Souse in fête fiancée unison.

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Glossary: With humility I'm giving what I tried to express
Nisi: Not final or absolute
Surfeit: The quality of being so overabundant
Obfuscation: Confusion resulting from failure to understand
Fête: An elaborate party [often outdoors]
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nadood Al Nasser 16 March 2011

i really like it. i do i really do. Hay u can check out my poems if u want

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You can make even the moon smile with your wonderful poems.This is as usual a great poem

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''Why in realm of obfuscation Souse in fête fiancée unison. ' ~ What a finish WoW! ! Jocund Spell bound I'm Agree with Venkata 'You can make even the moon smile ' Great work...Keep it up please as usual ten+++

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'In myriad nisi but surfeit oscillation...' finest line...to address this poem I must say its gemed by excellent 'Natural Metaphor'...enjoyed in full length...indeed a very good poem 10++

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Louis Cecile 18 April 2012

Reading this piece a couple of times I am reminded of the power of the relationship between man and woman. The play between water and the moon seems quite symbolic of this relationship. The power the unison is indeed very powerful. Quite a wonderful use of imagery.

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Prateep Sengupta 23 May 2012

I found the poem's Aquatic n' Lunar liaison most beautiful and romantic expression.

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Katang Chakravorty 11 May 2012

Emotion Packed Poetry Excellent vocab plus imageries Romantic ambiance Abundant / lush flowing..enjoyed much... thanks sharing

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Amitabha Bagchi 01 May 2012

Excellent crafting...jocund metaphor... Sure you'll join with your beloved under canopy of such romance... Stay smiling...enjoy every moment.... We too join you...from a distance Lol...10+

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Imageries in la grande ‘…Fiancée's face in veritable vibration/Heart in rhapsodic constellations. …’ May be moon too smiling as one commentator wrote ‘…Why in realm of obfuscation…’ ~ Well posed question …Joy enjoy with JOY Finest crafting with heart swinging effects Regards

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Bachha Chakravorty 29 April 2012

Indeed brilliant Poem with jocund imagery... I enjoyed it to the lees '...Solacing in blissful pavilion/Why in realm of obfuscation/Souse in fête fiancée unison....' Wow so much romantic Picturesque... La Grande You've used max to portray it Max marks

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