MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.


~ Aquatic N' Lunar Liaison ~ - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Aquatic n' Lunar Liaison ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
13 March 2011


Moon smiles on waveletful ocean
In myriad nisi but surfeit oscillation
Fiancée's face in veritable vibration
Heart in rhapsodic constellations.

Aquatic n' Lunar liaison
Metaphorically in coalition
Solacing in blissful pavilion
Why in realm of obfuscation
Souse in fête fiancée unison.

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Glossary: With humility I'm giving what I tried to express
Nisi: Not final or absolute
Surfeit: The quality of being so overabundant
Obfuscation: Confusion resulting from failure to understand
Fête: An elaborate party [often outdoors]
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Comments about ~ Aquatic N' Lunar Liaison ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • Prateep Sengupta (5/23/2012 10:45:00 AM)

    I found the poem's Aquatic n' Lunar liaison most beautiful and romantic expression. (Report)Reply

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  • Katang Chakravorty (5/11/2012 12:41:00 PM)

    Emotion Packed Poetry

    Excellent vocab plus imageries

    Romantic ambiance

    Abundant / lush flowing..enjoyed much... thanks sharing
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  • Amitabha Bagchi (5/1/2012 12:51:00 PM)

    Excellent crafting...jocund metaphor...

    Sure you'll join with your beloved under canopy of such romance...

    Stay smiling...enjoy every moment....

    We too join you...from a distance Lol...10+
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  • Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (4/30/2012 3:26:00 AM)

    Imageries in la grande

    ‘…Fiancée's face in veritable vibration/Heart in rhapsodic constellations. …’

    May be moon too smiling as one commentator wrote

    ‘…Why in realm of obfuscation…’ ~ Well posed question …Joy enjoy with JOY

    Finest crafting with heart swinging effects

    Regards
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  • Bachha Chakravorty (4/29/2012 9:51:00 AM)

    Indeed brilliant Poem with jocund imagery...

    I enjoyed it to the lees


    '...Solacing in blissful pavilion/Why in realm of obfuscation/Souse in fête fiancée unison....' Wow so much romantic

    Picturesque...

    La Grande

    You've used max to portray it

    Max marks
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  • Photode Photode (4/19/2012 10:18:00 AM)

    '...Why in realm of obfuscation
    Souse in fête fiancée unison....' Aha indeed very good..

    Soft Lithe Intolerably....I men so tender nay hurt by handling...

    Enjoyed much

    10+
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  • Louis CecileLouis Cecile (4/18/2012 5:34:00 PM)

    Reading this piece a couple of times I am reminded of the power of the relationship between man and woman. The play between water and the moon seems quite symbolic of this relationship. The power the unison is indeed very powerful. Quite a wonderful use of imagery. (Report)Reply

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  • Shanti Gloss Bagchi Glitter (4/11/2012 12:24:00 PM)

    'In myriad nisi but surfeit oscillation...' finest line...to address this poem I must say its gemed by excellent 'Natural Metaphor'...enjoyed in full length...indeed a very good poem 10++ (Report)Reply

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  • Rediffusion [bapi] Effusion [chakravorty] (4/3/2012 11:39:00 AM)

    ''Why in realm of obfuscation
    Souse in fête fiancée unison. ' ~ What a finish WoW! ! Jocund Spell bound I'm Agree with Venkata 'You can make even the moon smile ' Great work...Keep it up please as usual ten+++
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  • Venkata Lakshmi Narasimharao (3/26/2012 12:52:00 AM)

    You can make even the moon smile with your wonderful poems.This is as usual a great poem (Report)Reply

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  • Nadood Al NasserNadood Al Nasser (3/16/2011 10:32:00 AM)

    i really like it. i do i really do. Hay u can check out my poems if u want (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, March 26, 2012


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