Arguments Poem by Marieta Maglas
Arguments
You are like
an unvanquished fortress.
Your scathing accuracy
scares me, sometimes.
The words are burning
in your mouth.
They have an essence,
an intrinsic value
and a meaning
to unleash my mind.
The words you throw away
are whipping up the ideas.
They are ripping off their meaning,
when this meaning is too logical.
Your arguments
become swords
for cornering
the forces of the reason
and for releasing them to self,
But when
I hold you with my eyesight,
you transform yourself
apparently into another person,
and you simply say,
''I love you.''
‘Tis a defense.
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I held you with my eye sight You totally transformed yourself Apparently into another person And you simply told me ''I love you'' ... LOVELY MOMENTS IN THE LIFE OF A PERSON..TO BE NICELY TAKEN CARE OFF......10 READ MINE// FINALLY SHE CAME
Very logically you have painted the Dual-existence of person. As I see and as I hear or read by him are different. Yes, you have tried to paint the eternal asking of human being. H.L Borhes (as we pronounce in English) wrote in his diary, when I sit before the white pages of my diary to write poem, me not, another Borhes then write it. Perhaps commonly we call it the 'Alter-ego'. I tried to illustrate by Dual-existence. Above all you have really given us another masterpiece to read. Well-written and thank you very...very much. Regards, 10+++++ pranab
I had a problem with the first line is that right.your was like? anyway good write
Like Love Spake: ILY is always winner…. Thanks…sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
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4/25/2024 11:16:10 PM # 1.0.0.1119
O what a climax! like the ball passing through Mesi and Higuain scoring a goal. So nicely arranged everything in the poem to utter the final three words >>>>Ideas fly like a bird, thoughts bloom like a flower and mind flows like a river. your poem deserves a tenner.