Asif Andalib

Bronze Star - 2,391 Points (27 November 1967 / Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh)

As If We Are Adam And Eve - Poem by Asif Andalib

As if we are Adam and Eve
Our sorrows do not want to leave!

Our tears fall like rivers from mountain
Has anyone else has such a pain?

Our sighs are like gusty wind of monsoon
A sin has taken away life’s best boon!

I haven’t got chance to taste your kiss
Our smiles have gone like lost memories!


Comments about As If We Are Adam And Eve by Asif Andalib

  • Ralph The Elf (5/5/2012 2:51:00 PM)

    this is really good but a little length and detail would have given you high marks
    well done
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  • (5/4/2012 5:40:00 AM)

    that is what a pure love poem should sound like so honest and enchanting (Report)Reply

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  • (5/4/2012 5:07:00 AM)

    An emotion packed poem. Like it, a great write. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 7, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 8, 2011


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