As Promised - Your Left Clavicle Poem by Dónall Dempsey

As Promised - Your Left Clavicle

Rating: 5.0


My mouth
traces the edge

of your clavicle
kiss by kiss.

“Oooh I was never so
aware of my clavicle
before this! ”

You whimper.

“Never gave it
a second thought! ”

You moan.

“God! Do do the other
one! ”

I do
intend to

but my attention
is arrested

by your breasts
who

surround me


take me


prisoner

demand all
my attention

your usually
inverted nipples now

standing to attention
as for a national anthem.

It’s only hours later
I finally make it back

to your left clavicle
- as promised.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 22 April 2008

vivid, playful and romantik - it is your style - inimitable

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Scarlett Treat 16 April 2008

HA! I have discovered the secret to more than one reader...see your mailbox for the answer! ! LYN And by the way...the vacation seems to be working! !

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Original Unknown Girl 16 April 2008

Wowser..... and isn't clavicle such a pretty word? I'm sure your little lady was more than impressed with your longevity! HG: -) xx

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Flora Gillingham 16 April 2008

Hours! ! Oh Donall. Standing to attention that long is so waring on the.... feet :) F

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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