Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,692 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

As Shadow Of Love - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

As shadow of love yet not eternal
when we slumber winking stars
dream comes latching on to the love
as love and laughter being coursed genial

yet in our times as resourced from genesis
sheltered by the heart weeing the blood
as being shined as fragrant rose.

love when obsessive reasoned earthly
yet clapped out ebbing the tide
as demurred by the obsolescence
like shadow coursed from the sun
As listlessly waning from dawn to dusk


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  • (7/21/2009 1:53:00 PM)

    nice simile:
    ''As shadow of love yet not eternal
    when we slumber winking stars
    dream comes latching on to the love ''
    excellent lyric poem..10+++
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  • Melvina Germain (10/28/2007 11:02:00 AM)

    Very beautiful words spoken eloquently from a truly gifted poet. Thankyou so much for this wonderful piece Dr. Subhendu Kar.--Melvina-- (Report)Reply

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  • (10/19/2007 4:46:00 PM)

    its a very lovely vesion, top marks....
    Patrice
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  • (10/19/2007 6:26:00 AM)

    As a shadow of love...when we slumber winking stars...when the light comes shinin' from the sky and the tears are drying from our eyes.....as the final chain is broken by.
    will breathe on and drive away our fears.

    Its beautiful....thanks for sharing,
    Mary
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  • (10/19/2007 5:08:00 AM)

    A poem characterized by subtlety! Thanks Doc, Top marks. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/18/2007 8:31:00 PM)

    Another wonderful piece of yours, Dr. love this..thanks for sharing!
    hugs,
    Meggie
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  • (10/18/2007 3:29:00 PM)

    Excellent title. And the content of your poem does not disappoint. Write on, my poet friend.

    As always,

    Sandra
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  • (10/16/2007 5:33:00 PM)

    wow i love this one. it is well written. thanks for feeding our hearts with beautiful words well written (Report)Reply

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  • (10/14/2007 1:03:00 PM)

    Dr Subhendu! Another very good write! Enjoy reading your poems! ! ! A (10) ! !
    Thad
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 14, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 16, 2011


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