Cynthia Cyanide

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As Soon As It Began - Poem by Cynthia Cyanide

And then you were gone
And everything went black,
Everything was so messed up
Since you didn’t come back,

Life had no purpose to me
I was ready to let it go,
No tears ran down my face
I wouldn’t let weakness show,

It was hard to focus on my dreams
And understand “how”,
But when you finally did come back
I wanted to know “why now? ”,

You apologized for your wrong-doing
And I fell for you again,
You ended up breaking my heart
As soon as it began.


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  • Emily Oldham (10/24/2008 11:22:00 AM)

    great poem thanks. keep writing!
    Athena

    *** words will change the world ***
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  • (5/31/2008 1:36:00 PM)

    another great one cynnie. (Report)Reply

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  • (2/26/2007 6:03:00 PM)

    Protect that heart young lady, guys can be mean.
    Uriah
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  • (2/24/2007 10:47:00 PM)

    As a musician in a band i say this would make great song. You should be a lyricist. Great job cupcake man.

    -Jeff Bassist in NYJ
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  • (2/24/2007 8:54:00 PM)

    hmmm y do i get a feelin i was there when u felt like this...*coughTcough* o man im chokin. but other then tat i love it^^ as i do with all ur poemsso yea im out of things 2 say ^^U so ttyl8z

    ur best friend,
    GiR
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 24, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 22, 2011


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