Cynthia Cyanide

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Don'T Tell Me You Love Me - Poem by Cynthia Cyanide

Don't tell me you love me
If you're not sincere,
For a lie that strong
Can ruin my life and bring a new fear,
Fear to be loved
Fear to love again,
It can cause my fragile heart
To break, tear, and bend,
Think of all the joy
That will be missed,
All because
Of one broken promise,
So when I put all my trust
Deep with you,
Please don't tell me you love me
Unless you truely do!

Comments about Don'T Tell Me You Love Me by Cynthia Cyanide

  • Phoenix Rory (11/8/2007 2:36:00 PM)

    Who copied who? You, SarahLaney Long, and Crystal Camacho all have this exact same poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Isaias Rendon (4/18/2007 4:00:00 PM)

    This is comes from what my teacher taught in college:
    form is good
    good tone
    good rhyme
    something’s need to be un-capitalized
    need some commas
    overall I liked it

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 11, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 13, 2011

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