Uriah Poem by Cynthia Cyanide

Uriah

Rating: 5.0


I love how you write to me
So intricate and detailed,
I love how you make me feel accepted
I feel I know you so well,

When I talk to you
My whole world opens up,
I basically tell you my life story
And I feel that's not enough,

You're the only one who understands
Just who I really am,
I feel like you're the shepard
And I'm your little lamb,

You're someone I look up to
Even though we've never met,
I love you and I care about you
And I'm sure I always will, I bet!


~Dedicated to Uriah Hamilton~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aaron Combs 09 February 2008

it's a nice poem... it's weak at the end.. I like your lil metaphor I am the lamb and your the Shepard... it's really good...

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Alan Curtis 29 November 2007

Yea, Uriah's my homie we chat back and forth every now and then.He's Lucky, getting 2 go 2 a dead concert an all. Oh, nice poem and good use of words 2. Peace, Alan

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Uriah Hamilton 25 February 2007

Dear Cupcake Gir, thanks for the kind thoughts in this lovely poem. Always write and appreciate yourself, that's always the message. Uriah

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