Ask Any Mother Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Ask Any Mother

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No man would hesitate to lay down live?
If he really thinks of motherland and believes
What else can be holier than earth?
Everything else can be secondary even the death

Ask any mother of what she thinks of holy land?
Would she ever stop her sons from going on field by hand?
Will she hold them back for the sake of her own safety?
She will not as she has been considered as holy and equal to deity

What else she will do and witness?
How many more deaths to see and face?
What her inner soul may react?
These are all unanswered questions and acts

War does not spare any one
The territory is annexed and amnesty to none
Daughters, sisters and mothers raped for no reason
No sensible human being may like it as reasonable person

What is to follow later on the scene?
The plight, misery and poverty totally unseen
How many years it may take to reconstruct?
Where as it may take only seconds to destruct

You ask any mother for her comment
She may not utter a word but only lament
How can she prefer to be pregnant again?
When she has to accept total loss as gain

Even though sacrificed children for noble cause
There may be vacuum in life with little pause
Who will come in night and wipe the tears?
She has to spent sleepless nights and bear

That is how we rate the mother
Who can compete with her?
Let all deities come on earth and perform
The role played buy mother in any form

I would salute to mother first
The pray to God last
Even almighty owe their place in her womb
We all do a curse on her by destroying her dreams with bombs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 17 July 2011

very good poem... well written, thought provoking... the Mother image very strong, in her we see the human hands and heart of God unfolding... and the sadness of war... there are no holy wars. like this poem very much!

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It' a very good poem with a defined depth to it. I enjoy the underline criticism of so called holy war you have embedded in your poem. How one has a duty to survive, not for him self, but for his loved ones, as even if they do go heaven for the holy war, it is the ones they leave behind to carry the burden who suffer.

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Jim Troy 10 July 2011

A person does themselves a favor to lean back and clear the mind and read this very deeply considerate work. It is far from merely surface consideration for it wants the whole picture revealed. A very worthy piece of work for mankind to reflect upon for the good of everyone.... Thank you for sharing your beautiful spiritual unbilical cord.............. Jim Troy

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Unwritten Soul 08 July 2011

I love this poem, it's a great emotion for whole people..but i will love God first as He sent a mother to care me with love and gentle smiles...and He will listen every prayer i make for mother so He cares to make us eternally happy (mom and children) _Unwritten Soul

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I would salute to mother first The pray to God last Even almighty owe their place in her womb We all do a curse on her by destroying her dreams with bombs

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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