Aspen Grove Poem by Beach Girl

Aspen Grove

Rating: 4.8


Wandering through the endless wood
I paused to gaze in silent awe.
In the aspen grove I stood
Heart awash by all I saw.

Golden bright those flickering flames
Aspen grove was all ablaze.
Sun kissed leaves as summer wanes
Blanket hills these autumn days.

Round and round the leaves they fall
Wisked from branches to the ground.
In the grove the trees grow tall
Whispering leaves the only sound.

Tall and silent stood the Mountain
King of all that stands below.
His servants bow, as all around them
Golden coins to him bestow.

Pocketing the hills and valleys
Boullion stowed for King above.
Fir and pinion here to tally
All that Aspen give in love.

Icy fingers steel around me
Bidding me to leave this wood.
Farewell to aspen, as I must
But wished to stay if only could.

With pockets full of pine cones
And hat adorned with leaves
I trudged away toward parts unknown
Or where'er this trail might lead.

Thursday, December 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature walks
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this when I was in my early 20's.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Beach Girl 27 December 2020

Thank you Khairul Ahsan, I appreciate your encouragement!

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David Wood 28 December 2020

I too sat under aspen trees at my local lake with my elderly yellow Labrador. I felt I was there in your aspen grove too.

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Bri Edwards 17 December 2020

1 a favorite line: " Golden coins to him bestow." Yiyan and Kostas L. (a friend) don't expend too much energy on typing. Gooe enough! st.5 I believe these lines are not complete sentences; this threw me off. I researched " pocketing" . Do you mean leaves are tucked away, as into pockets? (a rhetorical question) st.7 though i adore the poem (and you) , how about " adorned" ? to MyPoemList bri :)

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Bri Edwards 24 January 2023

ah ha! I see you used 'adorned' as I suggested; perhaps you'd had a typo (adored?) . bri

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Bri Edwards 07 March 2023

Oops. I mistyped 'Good' as 'Gooe'. ;)

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Cowboy Ron Williams 10 January 2024

A very nice poem. This is your most recent, and it is from December 2020. Are you still with us, Beach Girl? I hope that you are well.

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Bri Edwards 27 September 2023

And MAYBE your 'new' photo on PH today is from your 'early twenties' ALSO! I already left comments & stars 'years ago'. : ) I hope you R well.

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Bri Edwards 07 March 2023

I'll look for one I've not read yet. ;) b

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Bri Edwards 24 January 2023

Who shines now more brightly, you or the golden autumn leaves? : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 24 January 2023

So, Ms. Beach, you wrote this poem when you were a mere slip of a girl. ;) bri

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