Sand in my toes
Scorched burning feet
Ran to the water
Got outta the heat
White frothy waves
Crashed over my head
Began to feel naughty
Bandeau was soon shed
Fled to my beach towel
Was freezing to death
The cold blue Pacific
Does fill one with zest
thanks for the rhyming. thanks for sharing. i saw you, i think: She searched for her beach towel, her bandeau loose in her hand. With binoculars well-focused, I missed her toes coated with sand. :)
This is wonderful, it conveys the experience of being on the beach with both the highs and the lows. I haven't been to a beach in ages (we don't have much of that where I live) so this was like a vacation for me. ^^
a good beach poem nice to have the sand between your toes 85433
Love it. It's been a while since I was at the beach. This made me feel like I was there. Thanks.
Excellent melodious poem. I read this poem more & more. I enjoyed it. Great ink! Thank you so much dearest poet Beach Girl. May ALLAH bless you. Be well always.
‘Tis true, ’ tis true, the pacific is cold. This does locate you, so now we know where that beach is. Read mine - Mother Dear - Adeline
I have no fear of shark attack, what I hate about the beach, is sand in my crack! Love your fast wit in beautiful brevity
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a very nice poem.It is very melodious and flows freely. I also liked the idea. Thanks for the write. Also, I invite you to read and comment.