Orlando Belo

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Astonishing - Poem by Orlando Belo

You are truly a curvaceous beauty,
an unbelievable sight for sore eyes.
I’ve never ever seen one quite like you,
you are so alluring, you hypnotise.

Your curves are sleek and amazing
and beg to be traced by touch.
I could sit and watch you forever,
you provoke desire and lust.

You are such an elegant mover,
a definite cut above the rest.
If only I could get my hands on you,
you would be sailing at your best.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Astonishing by Orlando Belo

  • David Wood (9/5/2015 5:58:00 AM)

    Lovely rhyming and metaphor, good poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/5/2015 1:54:00 AM)

    Awesome poem......................Pleasure to read it..........10+
    If u find time please review my poems, thanks in advance.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 5, 2015

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