Astral Plane Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Wow powerful....very intresting, love to see what else you have...look forward to more.

wow...so fantastic..smiles

It feels like a dreaming, makes me want to experience an astral plane the next time i lay my head.

An experience I can relate to!

Enjoyed this amazing poem very much; the world of dream is a facinating one, in some sense somehow connected to the spiritual. Keep it up!

Some of these sods leave me cold and sweating and others melancholy beyond belief and just occasionally I wake at 5am and think - Yeah! ! I think I understand this one but am wary having seen what others made of my writings!

This is a great poem. I liked very much!

I am not going to try to fix your poem into my own personal scheme of life; whether philosophical, religious, or whatever..but you have a clear voice, and I share some elements of the 'astral' type of experience; I have dreams, visions and voices- the dreams are often, they often come true; the visions much more rare- and they are often in the form of a warning, like some dreams are- but the voices, though extremely rare, are DEAD ON- and though they don't always know the outcome- they force me to focus attention on something I need to, something I don't do well without a stimulus. Love your poems.

so so nice Very few words

wow! it's a great poem..Awesome!