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At The Bench

Rating: 4.9

As I gaze to the boundless sky
Of lovers' starry dream,
From the lulling solitary bench
Under the tranquilizing tree of whim;
Sugar-coated smile sketched
On my rough and wrinkled visage;
Seeing the cottony-soft haze,
Forming my dream girl's angelic face;
Soothing my weary heart and mind,
From a long day of labor for life

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Rommel Mark Marchan 07 April 2009

HI MORE POWER YOUNG POET SURE U WOULD BE BETTER THAN VILLA SOMEDAY TAGA CDO MAN POD KO JAN SA BURGOS TRY TO READ MY ABU SAYAF POEM

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If you garnish this vocabulary any more we will be banished from your world...lol..iip

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Fay Slimm 06 April 2009

The descriptive expressions used here defy the reader to do anything but be taken up to the dreamy heights along with the rich words..... Juneil this breathes romance..... and 10 + + ++ from Fay for the breathtaking ride.

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Juneil Your imagery and vocabulary are excellent! I loved 'carousel head' and nectar of love The last stanza wrapped up a brilliant and beautiful piece of work. Karin Anderson 10 from me

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Catrina Heart 30 March 2009

Cosmic poetry applied written in a nice imagery....10

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Indira Babbellapati 30 March 2009

richly worded to suit the theme...

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Ency Bearis 30 March 2009

wonderful cosmic imagery write..impressive verses...10

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Malcolm The Last. 30 March 2009

You are quite good and consistent with your selection of diction. 10 From Me.

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Chad Robinson 30 March 2009

Blown away, my friend! good work.

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Miriam Maia Padua 30 March 2009

very poetic..lines are flowing with depth wonderful imagery great write...

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