Attention Please Poem by Pranab K Chakraborty

Attention Please



Pranab k c
08/2011

Promised to come our home field river sea cloud snow
Promised to appear blowing your sacred apron
white with mystic mist of thousand sun shining random

Promised to uphold all our conspiracy greed strong grip to snatch
last coin from distressed, last shelter from the homeless
virgin soil cracked and crushed by treasure monger

Promised to taught us love
Promised to give us light
Promised to take us away from death to life

Promised but failed to keep
failed and have been punished
as we the son and daughter of you
we have been directed to carry out order

painful to bear such hell on shoulder
since we the human never tried to be a God..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 28 August 2011

Arousing write...coming from mob irate.....sons and daughters only understood the order of adam and eve...the rest who understood a little beyond became photo frames some remembered with anecdotes called statues of which doubt i have if all carried actually any orders from God and some are just memories...shelter for homeless, job for jobless, knowledge for people without university, food for hungry are myths-when its solved actually there will nothing be left to say and Brigade will be a fools paradise as it always had been with the people who listened not the one who said from Calcutta Univ until Oxford and Harvard Univ..Still people in India will not learn and buy cheap black bin bags and a bucket to throw garbages of household chores out...question arrives here what will then the stray dogs, cats and mouses, crows do if the last house in the country becomes concerned with environment.Democratic write Sir...enjoyed

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