Pranab K. Chakraborty

Gold Star - 21,911 Points (West Bengal)

Death Was His Main Longing - Poem by Pranab K. Chakraborty

my love
my straight
nakedness
wants to be sucked

my love
my straight
willing
pronouncing loudly
your shit
by by hard haunting
the legal explanation
of distinguished
fucking and killing
rough

it's the trauma
a man suffering
by heart to be
a poet at last

I remained silent
as the state leaders
usually keep themselves dumb
when time demands their
real faces of treachery
to come
in daylight table of conversation!

Pranab k c
16/07/2018

Topic(s) of this poem: poetry


Comments about Death Was His Main Longing by Pranab K. Chakraborty

  • A B Faniki (9/7/2019 9:16:00 PM)

    Nice fisrt image. It is bold and clear. Intresting piece (Report)Reply

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  • Khairul AhsanKhairul Ahsan (7/16/2019 12:09:00 AM)

    'it's the trauma
    a man suffering
    by heart to be
    a poet at last' - well said!
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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (7/15/2019 11:41:00 PM)

    " it's the trauma
    a man suffering
    by heart to be
    a poet at last" .
    Congrats on poem of the Day.
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  • Gajanan MishraGajanan Mishra (7/15/2019 8:05:00 PM)

    Real faces of treachery (Report)Reply

    Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty(7/15/2019 8:24:00 PM)

    Thank you. Thanks for your interaction.

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (7/15/2019 1:53:00 PM)

    I'm afraid the poem contains more nakedness than was desired. I would like to repeat the words of Malabika Ray: 'Very modern poem with philosophical thoughts! I am trying to find the connection between the title and the theme! A little intriguing for me! ' Thanks & Congrats. (Report)Reply

    Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty(7/15/2019 8:30:00 PM)

    Not yet exposed the face without mask. It needs another degree of talent, perhaps not yet achieved the height..... Thank you for your wise interaction.

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (7/15/2019 1:27:00 PM)

    True love! !
    Willingly.

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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    Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty(7/15/2019 8:33:00 PM)

    Inspired. Thank you very much.

    Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty(7/15/2019 8:31:00 PM)

    Inspired. Thanks.

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (7/15/2019 12:01:00 PM)

    CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray for winning the prize, but your poetry speaks a lot about trauma and man's suffering. True sad but a beautiful poem, it deserves this place. God's Blessings, Pranab! (Report)Reply

    Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty(7/15/2019 8:41:00 PM)

    Warm with the inspiring tune of soul touches softly. Thank you very much.

    Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty(7/15/2019 8:37:00 PM)

    Warm with inspiring tune of soul touches softly. Inspired. Thank you very much.

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (7/15/2019 11:29:00 AM)

    It 's the trauma
    a man suffering
    by heart to be
    a poet at last......outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of the POD.
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    Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty(7/15/2019 8:47:00 PM)

    Wise your interaction. Thank you much.

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  • Malabika Ray ChoudhuryMalabika Ray Choudhury (7/15/2019 10:19:00 AM)

    Very modern poem with philosophical thoughts! I am trying to find the connection between the title and the theme! A little intriguing for me! Thanks for sharing! (Report)Reply

    Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty(7/15/2019 9:07:00 PM)

    Thank you poet. Here poet himself also confused with the random happenings of his surroundings... Title finally can't be told except child prose written to advice.. Inspiring your interaction. Thank you very much.

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (7/15/2019 3:31:00 AM)

    time demands
    their real faces,
    the treacherous minds
    which are hidden in good veiling........! allegorical poem; beautifully penned; thanks for sharing
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    Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty(7/15/2019 9:13:00 PM)

    Good soul! Your inspiration charge me again to thought with words. Thank you much.

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (7/15/2019 1:11:00 AM)

    It's the trauma a man suffering by heart to be a poet at last.....thought provoking expression! Many congratulations for this brilliant work being chosen as Poem of the Day! (Report)Reply

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  • Luis Estable (7/15/2019 1:09:00 AM)

    It reads like this tries to say something meaningful with rough language, but the second stanza put me in a path to a loss. (Report)Reply

    Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty(7/15/2019 8:51:00 PM)

    Finest your heart smells me the beauty of the world. Thank you very much.

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  • Adeeb AlfatehAdeeb Alfateh (7/15/2019 12:44:00 AM)

    my love
    my straight
    willing
    pronouncing loudly
    your
    by by hard haunting

    superb write
    great 10++++++++++++
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    Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty(7/15/2019 8:54:00 PM)

    Thanks for your inspiration. Inspired.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 16, 2018

Poem Edited: Monday, July 16, 2018


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