Monday, September 29, 2014

Autumn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thoughts swooning under
Autumn chill of afternoon
Flowers loosing bloom
Chirping birds return to nest
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Savita Tyagi
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Akhtar Jawad 10 March 2015

A beautiful description of changes that come with autumn.........................

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 09 November 2014

Calm kisses the autumn night wrapped in sequin of tiny bluets Earth's robe is still hazy green A beautiful poem describing the autumn season and its effects on human mind and soul.I enjoyed reading it. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Daniel Brick 19 October 2014

Your last three lines are wonderful! They constitute one of my favorite images EVER of the colors of autumn. It's not the description of leaves as clothes which is new. It's more complex than that. It's the image of nature as a tailor changing the color of the dress to vivid yellow and red to replace the common-place green - the time of his work equals the time of nature's changes, his artistry is nature's artistry, his mysterious mastery is the mystery of autumn. This is a wonderful evocation of what is MY favorite season, and you give this description without spoiling the beauty with even the slightest hint of winter.

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Geetha Jayakumar 13 October 2014

Beautiful poem with quiet Interesting lines........ Earth's robe is still hazy green Her red and orange dress being tailored For fall's show by skilled craftsmen of time. Beautiful preparation of nature to welcome Autumn. Loved your writing.

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Valsa George 02 October 2014

Autumn has set in and visible changes are on! You have beautifully described the changes! Enjoyed!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 October 2014

fall's show by skilled craftsmen of time The show starts delighting the eye and the heart. Beautiful autumn. Thank you.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 29 September 2014

Thoughts swooning under autumn, beautifully expressed poem and nice feeling it gives.

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