Theodora (Theo) Onken

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***autumn Kissed*** - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

The brillant orange, it billows-
The tawdry burnt, to brown-
The air 'tis filled with aroma of chestnuts-
And Mesquite wood, fills the breeze, in our town!

'Tis a brillant, crisp, Metamorphis-
As a catapillar to: The Monarch, Butterfly-
It reminds me, of this change, in season-
With the Golden and Dark leaves, blowing in the sky-

Comments about ***autumn Kissed*** by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • Marilyn Lott (10/23/2007 2:46:00 PM)

    Lovely poem to celebrate a lovely season
    A delicious time of year! I enjoyed it very


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  • (10/4/2007 12:20:00 AM)

    Doc and Diane, Thank You, Both!
    Your words ARE always appreciated!
    Blessings to you both!
    Theo: 0) xxxx

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  • (10/3/2007 10:49:00 PM)

    I like your poem also Theo! Lovely title and I can smell your autumn kissed air and picture autumn kissed monarchs flying there. Hugs, Diane (Report)Reply

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  • (10/3/2007 8:57:00 PM)

    Well, Andy from the votes, i see my poem was read by more than you, but no one wanted to comment. i always enjoy comments...whether good or bad, as good constructive critic is always welcomed. I love the Monarch. She is so regal...and yes, her colours-so Fall-like!
    Thank you for taking the time to read my work!

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  • (10/3/2007 4:17:00 AM)

    The beauty of the butterfly, so sweet upon the eye... just like this poem Theo..10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 3, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 12, 2011

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