Autumn Song Poem by Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken

A Beautifully Painted, Moving, Haiku! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

Wonderful Poem about autumn..10

Autumn is my favorite season and this poem beautifully captures one aspect. Lovely image ! !

The second line exceeds the usual number of syllable count which is 7 this line has 9 syllables. The word very could be omitted without changing the meaning conveyed in the line. Nudershada

A brilliantly penned haiku. Excellent 10