Autumns Sigh.. Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Autumns Sigh..

Rating: 5.0


Hear the chimes in the distance,
somewhere outside. While watching
the leaves in the sky. Twisting an
twirling, as they fly. A cool wind
rides. Curl up with my quilt inside.
As the big oak near by, bends his
branches, letting go, the last of his
leaves, with a sigh..

Thursday, October 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,beauty,feelings,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 04 November 2017

Yes. Oh my yes! I read your fun Halloween haikus but I was wanting one of your nature mood pieces on this brisk breezy fall day- and you delivered. Boy did you ever deliver. You didn't miss a beat throughout- -you absolutely painted this poem in autumn colors and line by line is the finest and then those closing lines caught up my soul. 1000000 stars would not be enough- -going on my fav list too! ! ! Stunning write, Becca. Absolutely stunning!

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Rebecca Navarre 04 November 2017

heh, :) the computer seems to be jumping ahead on me.

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Rebecca Navarre 04 November 2017

Goodness! ! ! ! ! Susan,10,000x Blushed And Honored By Your Beautifully (Kind) Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Ever So Beautifully Glows! ! ! ! ! With Such Depths! ! ! ! ! As The Evening Sun! ! ! ! ! Setting Soft And Gold! ! ! ! ! Across The Rivers And Mountains, Trees, , Just So! ! ! ! ! .... Absolutely Breath Taking! ! ! ! ! Love The Way Your Spirit Shines! ! ! ! ! In All You Do So Kind! ! ! ! ! Love The Way You Love And Praise The Lord! ! ! ! ! I Give Endless Thanks To Him! ! ! ! ! For The Message Heard Before! ! ! ! ! 7yrs my Mom Endless Praise! ! ! ! ! For Ever In His Name! ! ! ! ! ! Endless Prayers! ! ! ! ! Heart! ! ! ! ! And Love There! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many! ! ! ! ! Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! ! :) Stay Warm! ! ! ! ! And Much Care! ! ! ! !

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