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Awake!

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In the morning when I awake,
To the sound of birds by the lake.
As I lay there looking up,
Peace seems to fill me like a cup.

“Wake, wake! ” the birds chirp and cry!
Then, a radiant light fills the sky.
“Wake, wake to the new day! ” they trill.
I hear the laughter of children, and my heart fills,

For there is a joyous, chuckling laugh, I’ll hear no more,
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a very well crafted piece of writing

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Susan Witman 21 May 2008

This one is precious. more like this are recommended. Your rhyme is great. the flow is perfect. I think you may be on to something with this one. Great Job.

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Duncan Wyllie 04 August 2007

I think that there is a greater peace for those that have moved on, a special place where love and light are ever-present Love duncan X

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Not a member No 4 01 July 2007

Through such heartbreaking, devastating times there is great solace in faith. May there be everything there for him that you wish. Lovely, heartrending words from start to finish that echo your lost one's innocence. xx jim

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Raveendran . 27 June 2007

Beautifully said, brings a lost world before me

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Sandra Fowler 27 June 2007

A poignant tribute to a little boy who is happy, well taken care of, and waiting for you. Extraordinary, Mary. Love, Sandra

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Colin J... 27 June 2007

Beautful, heartbreaking poem. loved it. Colin J...10

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Edna Javelosa 27 June 2007

beautiful poem..but so sad...a joyous, chuckling laugh, I’ll hear no more..Do you suppose heaven has frogs he can catch? ..10

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