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In the morning when I awake,
To the sound of birds by the lake.
As I lay there looking up,
Peace seems to fill me like a cup.
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This one is precious. more like this are recommended. Your rhyme is great. the flow is perfect. I think you may be on to something with this one. Great Job.
I think that there is a greater peace for those that have moved on, a special place where love and light are ever-present Love duncan X
Through such heartbreaking, devastating times there is great solace in faith. May there be everything there for him that you wish. Lovely, heartrending words from start to finish that echo your lost one's innocence. xx jim
A poignant tribute to a little boy who is happy, well taken care of, and waiting for you. Extraordinary, Mary. Love, Sandra
beautiful poem..but so sad...a joyous, chuckling laugh, I’ll hear no more..Do you suppose heaven has frogs he can catch? ..10
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12/6/2025 3:25:38 AM # 1.0.0
a very well crafted piece of writing