Bad Day / I Hate You Poem by Annie Janine

Bad Day / I Hate You

Rating: 5.0


I had
a bad day
I felt
all alone
and as the anger
built up inside me
I started
to hate myself
I started
to hate this world
I'm tired
of being 'the loser'
I'm tired
of taking all that crap
I'm tired
of being ignored
by you
and your friends
I hate you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ron Flowers 19 November 2008

A good write, Elmo, but don't waste your time on hate. It does you far more harm than whoever you are hating. Regards Ron

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Rose Rosado 28 June 2008

i could feel that pain, i've always felt that way when i felt alone and afraid, i couldn't trust any1 in my despair of my own little world, great poem.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 May 2008

kool down elmo. drink some ice!

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Tyease Collins 17 May 2008

I feel that one... the anger and stuff I've felt but I've just learned that hating and stuff is just a waste of energy. Still...i love the poem Good job

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Bernard Tommy Vue 13 May 2008

Don't hate, for there is nothing to hate. For you.. are only hurting yourself. Don't let hate consume you. For it may destroy you. Read my hope poem that MIGHT.. and I repeat MIGHT cheer ya up.

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