Thursday, October 16, 2008

Balcony Vi Comments

Rating: 5.0

On tiptoe you came
The playful hiss
Of the scarf touching
The marble floor
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 October 2008

I have read your all belcony series. Ammmmmazing! They depict your powerful poetic vision 10+++++++

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Anjali Sinha 16 October 2008

'Like musk and amber The red of the carpet From pashmina of Kashmir The silk drapes in indigo' The whole of Kashmir is unfolded in its splendour. I love your passionate description of love on the Balcony. A+ and 10+ regards anjali

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Reshma Ramesh 16 October 2008

The rooms are built Of gold and marble Seen but in reality They are the dust Of the feet of lovers how beautifullll sadiq this made me hold my breath.....

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Seema Chowdhury 16 October 2008

very nice composition. very smooth flow.

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