Barbarism In Pink City Again Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Barbarism In Pink City Again

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I am really shocked to behold the pink city
Blood when flows near by the green field
From the ill fatted souls of their mother’s womb
Tear when turns red eyes yet steeped in sorrows

Serial blast such brutal act against humanity
in this maddened world by this mankind
fire when burns the love in men innocent
peace and care when waned by evil insane

should we still call them homosapiens, perhaps no
unwanted rogues resourced by their own ill design
society still seems wild by the doings of paranoia
yet we call upon justice knocking the door of divine

barbarism still plays by the laughter of wickedness
slanting across the door of terrorism when befuddled
as when wrought by the minds of ill born dunderheads
can we not classify them in between man and killer giant

still they seem to be more severe and wild by the death
even more dangerous than wild and insane of the jungles
the crown when worn by the heinous world of terrorism
the cruelty has already infiltrated to our blood

yet not the last massacre of trade centre or else where
that has not yet been blotted out from our mind,
still we remember that horrific moments by the death

the process of annihilation when starts
sun may disappear from east or west
man when counts his age by the void in darkness
heart still bleats and blurs by the hope against hope

and we condemns this domestic terrorism by monsters
God might be feeling pity for those Frankenstein
who never think of their own grave.hanging on their heads

I sill remember the inch cape rock against the storm
Ralf the Rover when embraced the deadly death
I still pray God never allows these heartless worms
to be here again or to grow some where on this earth,
lest the tears may not fall again in the furrows of remorse and sorrows

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cyclopseven R 18 August 2008

Wow..the depth of it really impressed me. The choice of words depicts the turmoil within every man on this earth and the environment where we live. You have jumped to the core of humanity. Something that should be deleted from human mind, have become an inalienable part of our minds. That's scary. Well done Dr.

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A terrorist is a character marked by conflict. The one who doesn't feel conflictual doesn't know what to make of terrorism. The one who stands by the victims as well as Dr. Kar unlikely pays attention to a conflict.

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Ben Gieske 21 May 2008

You paint a picture of troubling times. But it seems like the way humans treat each other is just a rehash of all other times with different words and different means. When was there a time when no one was held in 'slavery' and when humans got along with one another justly and fairly? It seems like we have never gone beyond the barbarian stage. Yet there are so many truly working and striving to make this a better world for all. So keep up your work and continue to send your message. Hopefully, it helps.

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Thad Wilk 14 May 2008

I know of this terrorist act Dr. Kar! My prayers go out to all the people and families the innocent victims in this atrocity! ! Thank you for sharing. Friend Thad

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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