Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 688,256 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Base Or Basis - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Nothing succeeds like success
Nothing is secret if you have easy access
That shall lead you to the path of recovery
Rest all must be left to the mercy of almighty

Person should be ambitious
If he wants to be come famous
Earn the good name and fame
But must never try to pass the blame

Leave no stone unturned
When events turn
Against you and pose problem
It needs real address on them

One should have confidence
If offered slight chance
It is fight for survival
Only resolve should be for the revival

“The heaven can not be attained” legend says
Until you die self and maintain
Same dignity as you were alive
The dreams should relived

Believe in your own hands
It can only prove your friends
In the time of crisis
It must form base or basis

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/27/2014 11:20:00 AM)

    welcome shujat ahmed
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/26/2014 11:31:00 PM)

    Rohani Daud likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gajanan Mishra (3/26/2014 11:16:00 PM)

    dignity as alive, I like it,10 sir. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/26/2014 11:13:00 PM)

    True


    Jessica Sikora7 minutes ago
    Very beautiful work love the message :)
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/26/2014 11:12:00 PM)

    excellent!


    Anthony Elion Jr.1 minute ago
    I like that its not straight forward and it is something you have to think of to get. I love deep poems. Keep it up!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/26/2014 11:12:00 PM)

    A very Hit home poem.


    TheJarheadOrder5 minutes ago
    It felt like It could pertain to any person, and could potentially be helping to anyone going through a tough time.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/26/2014 10:50:00 PM)

    Nothing succeeds like success
    Nothing is secret if you have easy access
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 26, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 27, 2014


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