Basic Love Poem by Smoky Hoss

Basic Love

Rating: 5.0


A valley of flowers
waving and swaying
like a cheering crowd
caught up in victory
of the winning wind,
dances with delight
heads held high
praising the sun
for the life
they've won.

Existence engaged
at this
the simplest sensation,
glory and grace
in primordial presentation.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 11 July 2013

A beautiful poem, a wonderful write.

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Juan Olivarez 07 July 2013

Beautiful picture. Great poem

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Valerie Dohren 04 July 2013

Beautiful Smoky, you paint a lovely scene of flowers and philosophy.

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