Beachday Haiku Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Beachday Haiku

Rating: 4.7


Jogging much closer

curious seagulls surround

sandcastle builder

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malini Kadir 17 February 2009

tickles imagination! lovely!

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 17 April 2009

it makes me want to go to the beach myself.. truly poetic u are and u amazing! !

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James Roberts 20 February 2009

excellent you caught the essence of the sea side jim

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 February 2009

beautiful haiku..artistic beach so inviting... the sandcastles...reminds us of our childhood days...

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Jayaprakash Panicker 19 February 2009

your pen brush seems to be so sharp that it is able to stroke a few lines and reveal a canvas much bigger than ordinary mind could hold. i like it. () BLack jaypee

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Naidz Ladia 19 February 2009

whatta beautiful beach.....with sand so white and water so clear......clear for joggers to see corals better....nice lines dear... naizz

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