Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 21,524 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Beachday Haiku - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Jogging much closer

curious seagulls surround

sandcastle builder


Comments about Beachday Haiku by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/17/2009 9:35:00 AM)

    it makes me want to go to the beach myself.. truly poetic u are and u amazing! ! (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • James Roberts (2/20/2009 7:02:00 AM)

    excellent you caught the essence of the sea side
    jim
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (2/20/2009 5:19:00 AM)

    beautiful haiku..artistic
    beach so inviting...
    the sandcastles...reminds us of our childhood days...
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Jayaprakash Panicker (2/19/2009 7:47:00 PM)

    your pen brush seems to be so sharp
    that it is able to stroke a few lines
    and reveal a canvas much bigger
    than ordinary mind could hold.

    i like it. () BLack

    jaypee
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Naidz Ladia (2/19/2009 3:49:00 PM)

    whatta beautiful beach.....with sand so white and water so clear......clear for joggers to see corals better....nice lines dear...
    naizz
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Malini KadirMalini Kadir (2/17/2009 9:42:00 PM)

    tickles imagination! lovely! (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Read all 6 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 17, 2009



[Report Error]