VIPINS PUTHOORAN


<≪≪≪beauideal≫≫≫≫ - Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

I.
Oh, beauideal! unveil thine plaid,
Where my heart and love I laid.
Thine parts shone, lo! 'bejewelled belle'
And thy ornated feet had my heart's bell.
II.
Thy lips like cymbals, rang loves' thyme,
Like a sonnet had its perfect rhyme.
'Thou wast a queen with a pearl bespangled parsol'
Thirsted were the drops of my drizzle of soul.
III.
Wandered were they the most-
To glide throu' thy plums in a lust.
Hastn't yet thou heard the music of rain-dance
When I wait 'ere with my heart for thy glance?

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about <≪≪≪beauideal≫≫≫≫ by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

  • Anita Sehgal (12/27/2012 5:03:00 AM)


    beautifully woven with choice words..! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/26/2011 6:13:00 AM)


    wow...beau ideal...
    Read this one over and over again..now want to read all of your poems
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  • Dylan Dowrick (12/25/2011 7:18:00 PM)


    are you sure you didnt come out of a Shakespearean novel? very good fellow colleague (Report) Reply

  • Dylan Dowrick (12/25/2011 7:12:00 PM)


    are you sure you didnt come out of a Shakespearean novel? very good fellow colleague (Report) Reply

  • Dylan Dowrick (12/25/2011 7:09:00 PM)


    are you sure you didnt come out of a Shakespearean novel? very good fellow colleague (Report) Reply

  • (12/19/2011 12:05:00 PM)


    such a beautiful poem there are many poems of love but there are only a couple that i can read over and over...and i just read this about 8 times (Report) Reply

  • (12/15/2011 5:54:00 PM)


    Woa. Beautiful use of Old English mixed with an issue that is still prominent today. This is a wondrous poem. (Report) Reply

  • (12/12/2011 9:05:00 AM)


    dear friend,
    u have a great command over language. excellent work.
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2011 2:22:00 AM)


    Wonderful wording, a great poem. (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2011 2:33:00 PM)


    This is truly magnificent, you always seem to come up with the most brilliant works, phenomenal poem my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Jacqui Broad (12/2/2011 3:54:00 AM)


    Another beautiful poem! I see lately you use old English. Like the old masters Shakespeare etc. You're great, though. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 2, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 12, 2015


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