Beautiful Poem by Nia Schexnider

Beautiful

Rating: 3.7


He makes me smile,
...for a while.
He makes me cheerful
...instead of fearful.

But I am no goddess,
And I am not modest.

I take his affection,
but give no detection,
of my intention to leave,
And I let him believe.

That I will be there,
That I will care,
That I am the only one,
But I was just having my fun.

'She is so bitter! '
But I'm not a quitter.
I never gave up my fight.
I loved him into the night.

I loved him all the day long,
I let love sing it's song,
But when it was time for the end,
I did not pretend.

And I left him with a smile,
That he kept for a while.

Monday, April 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Herbert Poetry 25 April 2014

Very loving and beautiful poems

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Rajendran Muthiah 21 February 2020

The woman who says herself that she is not modest, makes use of her God given smile to trap him and make him mad of her and and leave him with a smile, her powerful weapon to tumble down the men. Such women are many nowadays. The poet depicts the reality in the society.

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 June 2015

Nice poem of love.Flow and wordplay is nice too.Liked it.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 14 June 2014

i love the rhyme and the flow, it feels to melt into one and the poem so good, smooth, sweet and beautiful good work indeed

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Khairul Ahsan 07 June 2014

Your 'Beautiful' is a beautiful poem. It seems the parting was not too bad, the end came on a cheerful note. The poem has a good, natural flow. Loved reading it.

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Abhinit Chute (abz) 27 May 2014

Beautiful poem.. it was flowing when I went through..! Good job

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